M.E.W. Episode 1 part 1 revised rough draft

WARNING: The following is a revised-rough draft of the first part of episode 1 M.E.W.
If you are easily sickened by bad grammar and spelling then i suggest you don't read this

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 It was very late at night. The moon's glow entered into Pilantha Kashine's bedroom and illuminated the comic book she held in her hand. She had been reading her whole collection of Niji Sky manga again so she could recap everything that had happened before she read the latest one that just came out that day. There was no way that she would sleep before she read through the whole thing, after all, she did spend 3 hours waiting for the comic book store to open just so she could buy it.
She flipped another page excitedly, examining every little detail in the line art of the new panels. Niji, the heroine, was just about to be decimated by her arch enemy. As she fell dramatically to her foes feet Pilantha held her breath. Could it be that this was the final issue of Niji? It couldn't be! She thought quickly as she scanned the next page. As her eyes fell to the very last panel of the page she beheld a beam of light impacting the foul demon from behind. Pilantha's jaw dropped in shock.
Could it be? She flipped the page as fast as she could.
"It is!" she said in a quiet yell of excitement. The next page revealed a full body picture of a hooded figure with wings like an angel. This particular figure had followed the heroine around, watching over her and protecting her from hidden dangers that were always trying to take over. They had never shown the full figure of the character before, even though it was only a black silhouette in front of the glowing powers emanating from the figure's body. Pilantha finally knew it was a woman. She basked in the glory of the picture, which took up the whole page. Only a few seconds later the sleepiness that she was ignoring crept over her eyes and started to force them down. She fought as hard as she could to stay awake as she slowly moved her head to the next panel. The picture was of the silhouetted figure finally coming out of the shadows. Pilantha started to feel dizzy, but she kept her eyes on the picture. To her great astonishment, it started to move. A small gasp released itself from her lips as she realized she wasn't in her room anymore. She quickly whipped her head around and saw nothing but white. As she slowly turned her head to face forward again she noticed that the black silhouette had moved closer to her. Pilantha was frozen  in place as she watched the graceful steps of the winged figure.
A whisper of a voice sounded through the air.
"Pilantha..." it called.

Pilantha didn't exactly know what to say other than
"Hello?"

"Pilantha..." it murmured again. "Pilantha, listen carefully to what i say."

Pilantha was at a loss for words. Suddenly a new voice emerged from the silence. A voice full of authority.
"O child of the world, must you be blind for me to have to say this? Be prepared, for i bring you a task that is not easily dealt with."

An ominous silence filled Pilantha's ears as she listened for more. That's when she noticed that the silhouette was beckoning her to come closer.
"You must come to me, Pilantha." the new voice said.

Pilantha thought that the voice meant the silhouette, but right when she stepped towards it, she spread her wings and slowly glided away.

"Wait!" she yelled, then starting to run after it. It wouldn't stop, but she kept chasing after it. Soon enough the ground started to slop upward and Pilantha started to make out two other figures. They were both pinned up on what looked to be wooden planks that were nailed together. She started to slow her pace as she cautiously came towards them. She stopped to look up at the towering structures that the figures were hung on. The voice spoke again, sounding as if it was louder.

"Pilantha... Come to me." it said in a comforting voice. Pilantha suddenly looked up at the tallest wooden frame and gazed upon a bloody man who had both of his hands nailed to the beams. His blood slowly dripped down as he looked upon her. She realized it was him talking.

"Come and die with me," he said "so you may live." the words didn't make any sense and Pilantha was frightened by them. As she started to back away she looked to the other figure on his right. She looked straight into the girls eyes and was horrified to see two eyes that looked extremely familiar.
Pilantha pushed off of her bed and whacked the back of her head on the backboard, then collapsing in splitting pain. As she held her head she heard a small crinkling under her and realized she was ruining her new comic book.

"I need to stop reading manga so late." she said as she pulled it out from under her torso. She groggily looked at her wall clock and then hurriedly shoved her self out of bed.

"CRAP! I'm already late!" she yelled as she tripped over a pile of comic books on the floor. She got up and hurriedly dug through her drawers and hamper to find her crumpled uniform and then pulled her hair back into a very messy ponytail, not caring much about what she looked like. She then grabbed her large black rimmed bottle cap glasses and shoved them on her face as she bolted out the door, not caring to close it. As she bounded down the narrow stairwell her foot slipped and she whacked onto the wood flooring. The noise must've scared the living daylights out of her mother for she heard a plate clatter onto the counter top. Pilantha slowly got up and then started to search for her bag, purposely ignoring her mothers glare as she walked by.

"Pilantha Kashine!" She started. Pilantha groaned and turned towards her angry mother.

"I thought you'd left at least a half an hour ago! What happened?" she said, exasperated. Pilantha rolled her eyes.

"I just slept through my alarm, mom. Honest mistake..." she trailed off as she looked near the front door.

"And what in the name of the Lord made you sleep so heavily?" she asked sternly. Pilantha froze as she knew there was no point in lying.

"I-uhh... I was reading my new comic..." she mumbled.

"Pilantha Rose Kashine!" her mother yelled. Suddenly the clock tolled 7:30 and the toaster went off. Aiming for a quick escape she bolted towards the toaster and grabbed the bagel, then stuffing it in her mouth, slipped on her shoes near the door and grabbed her scooter padding.

"Sawy mof! Fwont du ipth agaun!" she managed to say as she flung out the of the door.

"You're grounded from reading your comics for a week, Pilantha!" her mother yelled after her.

Pilantha gave a collective sigh as she hopped on her scooter and pushed off of the ground. Quickly turning around the corner of their small ally way, she got on the main sidewalk next to the street and started to gain more speed. She looked back at her families tiny flower shop with remorse. She didn't particularly like making her mother mad, and she really didn't like getting grounded, but there was no time to think about it if she wanted to get to school on time. As she speedily past a dark ally way she thought she saw a camera flash out of the corner of her eye. She turned her head slightly to see if anyone was there, but she was already to far away to make anything out. She easily forgot about it and kept rocketing down the sidewalk. Though, once she was out of sight a woman strode out of the ally, holding a strange device.

"I see" she said. "So it's her..."